(intro) Good morning everybody, my name is Stefi and I am a student at IES Castelló.
I 'm going to speak about these topics because I think that they are important in daily life. I’m going to explain you the importance of the leisure and friends. I explain you this oral presentation with photos and images that reflect a little these topics. Finally, you can ask me questions.
(leisure) -Okay, I’m going to talk about leisure.
leisure is a part of our lives that are very important.
Is the free time, is a period of time that we spend out of work and domestic activities.
It helps sometimes to disconnect from all our problems and it helps to relax or do other thinks that aren't compulsory tasks, as go to work, go to the school or study.
The leisure allows us to remove the accumulated tension and forget the problems and thinks that people don’t like.
Leisure is a moment when we can spend our free time doing our hobbies: playing a sport, painting, reading, collecting, playing games, cooking…
These hobbies are activities or interests that are started for pleasure or relaxation. But overall, I think that a hobby is an activity that you must like.
In my daily life I spend a lot of time going to school, or doing the homework and studying. But also I have got a free time: I practice volleyball, sometimes I read books or I watch TV. It depends of my state, so when I want to relax and rest, I watch TV, read a book or magazines, I play with computer games, I call my friends, I listen to music… And when I want to get fun or I want to laugh, I go out with my friends at day and at nights too.
Well, now I’m going to talk about the importance of friends and family in our leisure time.
(friends)Okay, now I explain you the importance of friends and the family in our lives and in our free times.
Friends are usually present in your free time, and they must transmit confidence and they are feeling you a good time.
The leisure time with friends is for anyone (include animals), and all ages. And you could have animal friends, for example your pets: dogs, cats, birds, rabbits, tortoises… Only if you have got a pet, you can understand this.
I say that friends are very important part of leisure time because, as I have told to you, they make us laugh, and you can share unique experiences.
Family is a good spending time too. For example: in special days (for example Christmas) when the all members of family are meeting. And you are entertained because they laugh, explain jokes, and tell you a lot of interesting things.
MYSELF EVALUATION
I'm not looking my audience all the time, because I'm nervous, but I don't read some much, only for remember and situate the parts of my presentation.
I doing some movement to hold the attencion of audience, but I think that it's more for my nervousism than for hold the attencion.
I estructured my ideas in the order of importance that I believe that it's correct. I used many discurse makers, but now, I saw that they're always the same: well, I'm going to; and in the end, I used finally.
It's difficult to say that if the information that I explained is interesting, but I think that it isn't very interesting because it's a topic of my life, and I think that people aren't interested to this things.
I give some examples and I think that my information it's clear. And one thing it's sure: the information it's original, because I speak about my opinion of social life and leisure.
I think that my grammar it's correct, but it isn't very complex. I used sentence linkers, but I don't used pause fillers, because I think that I speak a little fast.
I think that I know how is the pronunciate of the words, but I don't know the pronunciate of all the words. And I don't speak like a robot, I speak with a entonation.
For improve my next presentation, I will checked my pronunciate and the mistakes that I had.
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